Poetry out Loud Poems: Ectopic Pregnancy Poems "My Mother's Diary"

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By hillymillydee

How Poetry Out Loud Poems Strongly Touch Hearts?

If you are a lover of poems and you enjoy reciting them, poetry out loud poems are just perfect for you. Reading poems from the heart can make you feel the emotions the poet intended to add to it. Poetry out loud poems are alive and strong. Try reading this new composition of mine, recite it with the power of your voice and with the fullness of your heart.

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"My Mother’s Diary"


Dramatic:

Don’t look at me,
.....because I am guilty
Don’t pity me
..... because I’m lost
I am a child
..... a child of my mother’s love."

Narrative:
T’was early morning cold,
one chilly winter day
I just don’t remember
I have nothing to say

A cottage by the woods,
my mother she bore me
With her mind full of power,
and her heart full of love

As she sweat and she pushed,
giving the chance for me
She knew that her world,
will end that very day

Every minute of time,
she made her mind strong
Counting the breath she takes
until her child is born

She knew that in a while,
a time to rest and sleep
A rest that’s forever,
in the darkness of death

(Dramatic:)

Oh mother.. my mother!
....what love you had for me?
Your life you didn’t care,
....you gave them all for me

But mother.. my mother!
.....what’s life ahead of me?
You’re not there to cuddle,
..... and you’re not there to care

Who else would be like you?
..... Who will love me like you do?
My life and my future,
..... is useless without you


(Stage performance:)
Anyone knows my mother?
Do you know her so well?
If so please come to me,
you have something to tell

(Narrative:)
But no one dare to answer,
they seem to be in fear
The truth they keep hiding,
the truth they don’t reveal

Dramatic:

"Oh mother, my mother!
my poor heart’s in trouble
Please give me an answer
tell me what’s the matter"

Narrative:

My dad went out one night
to be with friends somewhere
I don’t mean to blame him
for he is always alone

I took my little chance
to sneak in his room,
In my daddy’s pillow,
a book that’s nearly torn

An old little notebook,
that is filled with writing
With photo of my mom,
oh!.. it's already fading

All the answers are there,
about my dear mother
Her life was endanger,
The doctor had told her

This how it is in ectopic pregnancy. The mother can choose either she will lose her life or the baby. This was where this poem was rooted

She was given a choice,
either me or her own
She sighed and she uttered
“please let my child be born”

Oh pitiful mother..
who gave the chance to me
When we're both a victim,
of ectopic pregnancy

Yes in my mother’s womb,
death and life awaits me
My mother chose to die;
yes she died just for me


Stage performance:


Tears fall down from my eyes,
to know the true story
My mother was at risk,
the time she conceived me.

Now I finally see
the truth they hid from me
My mother had written,
it’s in her diary

Do you think I’m guilty?
Do you think I’m lost?
A child of my mother,
who loves me so dearly

Though I cried and I cried
weeping so bitterly
I’m just glad that I found.
MY MOTHER'S DIARY......

...............End.................

How did you like this poetry out loud poems?

By the way this poem is intended to be recited out loud that is why it is a poetry out loud poems. You can see the scene jumps from past to present then back again. It has a narrative part, a dramatic scene and stage performance.

In the narrative, you recite it as if you are relating the story, the dramatic is full of drama as if it is happening right at the very moment and the stage performance is when you know you are performing on the stage to your audience. So the actor plays all the multiple scenes indicated, changing his tone and beat from time to time.

Rhyming poems are different, they just go smooth from the start to the finish. They have good connectivity, like a song with a mellow tunes, but this is kind of poem,sudden changes occur which is shown in the feelings and emotions of the performer.

Like music, there many types of poems with different styles and beats, and there are many types still being created by modern poets today that it is hard to catch up with the flow.

Anyway thank you for reading and more poetry out loud poems, Read more poems here

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Quiz

If you are the mother, which would you choose?

  • Your life
  • Your baby's life
  • Prefer not to answer
See results without voting

Comments

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hillymillydee Hub Author 5 weeks ago

Hi Deborah,

Thanks again for your visit and your kind and encouraging comment.

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Deborah Brooks 5 weeks ago

these poems are wonderful.. wow!! you made me cry for your mom she was so good only what was best for her daughter. Blessings

Debbie

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hillymillydee Hub Author 3 months ago

Yes Senoritaa,

I agree with you, if I am the mother I will think the same as you. But I just made a little bit emotional. And it just picture how mothers are risking their lives.

It is just a poem anyway don't be sad for it.

I want to say thanks for reading and taking time to type your thoughts

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Senoritaa Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

This is out of the world! Simply fabulous. I just loved the way your words flowed between dramatic and narrative. Although my perspective on the subject is that if the mother knows that its going to be her or her child, I think she should choose herself, because the child she is giving birth to at the cost of her own life is bound to have a miserable life after her mother is gone. Why give birth to a child whose future is bleak. I am sorry but that's just my take on it.

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hillymillydee Hub Author 3 months ago

Sorry if the connectivity is not clear, now I edited it and indicate if it is narrative or dramatic.

Actually this is a declamation and also be an oration that is why it is jumping from scene to scene. It is not a pure narrative or rhyming poem. I used to deliver this types of poems when I was young.

I made some narrative and rhyming poems that you can see the side bar.

Thanks for voting and sorry for not indicating it well

Capedium 3 months ago

It is a nice poem.. But I had trouble connecting with the words..

And you keep jumping from scene to scene..

You where dancing round and round.. If you had just hit the nail. It would have being a great poem..

You mum is gone..

Living you so hurt..

Rethorically! So many question running through your mind.

It hurts but in the end you found a reason to be strong...

It is a very nice poem, with great concept.. Just was not connecting well..

Thanks for sharing.. Voted beautiful.

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